The drawings are very nice, but the storyline is boring.

Good drawings, defiantly needs music and maybe a twist in the end of the story

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hi Orly ma hamazav ? ze michael... paam dibarnu bamessenger beota hatkufa shel ha sefer shelah.. moadol haalufim lo? ravnu al harbe dvarim ve hakol, aval nehmad haya lirot pitom et ha shem shela po. gam ani holeh lenasot et mazali. achla ziurim, lamrot she ha nose dei nadosh letaami. good luck :)

great! love the idea, please add music!