i love what you've created, not only does it tell a story in a literal sense, but on many figurative levels, it is a perfect metaphor for the birth and death of a civilization, from the moment of conception.

this is fabulous and flows really nicely. definitely a fun world to play with.

I take it as the futuristic Tower of Babel.

atmospheric!

I like this idea. It might be cool to keep some of the scratchiness of this storyboard style in the 3D if possible.

Interesting. I like the world you've created -it's intriguing. Good atmosphere. Well done.