that was very good, wow...good

ah man, nice.

Its very good, but I think a few things would make it better. First, you could make the radio "bump" to the rhythm of the song; maybe slow is down a bit, and makes it smoother and more mellow. Second, it would be awesome if you could mke her eyes be closed for a little longer at the end, then make it fade out.

Alright! Its good to see people getting into the contest!