this almost made me cry! it just makes me feel so sad that the birdie has no mommy, especially when it hugs the speaker

hmmmm......as the other have said you need more body to make this more interesting, you know more plot.....it was heartwarming and well drawn, but plotless

I really wish you had done more with the story here. It ended and I found myself wanting much, much more. I love the mood it brings, however, and the concept is warming.

the concept idea is not bad. You needed to flesh out the story a bit and make some changes in the music as the bird ages. Since you didn;t do that the interest fell sharply. There was no closure either. It just feels incomplete as a whole and the 12 principles of animation were not present either.