Twinkle Big Star    10 July 2009

BIG HUGS! † God Speed You Love! †

verry cute =D 5/5

Nice job, a bit short, though. It's true that the eyes are the window to the soul, so a change there would definitely help. Mainly though I would have like to have seen more gags, more funny business, to make it longer. It doesn't quite make the length required, even with the overly long end credits. Great work!

Good Contrast BUT, It's hard to make a connection with, the SnowMan because the eyes have no feeling "Shark Eyes" . A small adjustment will help, Add an iris to the pupil. Good, sometimes bad Critic