Rank 9: Scrapbook fairy    8 August 2009

Ah thanks for explaining, Awaken. Haha, well, best of luck! And hey, finalists or not, we can all still develop our stuff to try to be the wildcard! :D

Thanks for comment. Yes, you are right about structure. Here is the thing; not reading carefully propositions, I was sure that first we must do, like in Radiohead contest, small peace of movie and than later all. So I made, all, about 3 min. Squeezing is what loose a structure. But, I have now better version, if I got a chance to show... :)

(Btw - others surely used pre-existing rigs or ideas, but it only bugged me here. So it's more about the lack of visual story structure to me...)

Oops! Comment 2 long. Anyway the context seems oddly tacked-on because it's not really SHOWN. The pacing and framing should introduce the story to us.

Not to disrespect this, just to give a constructive note: I feel that the strength of good visual storytelling is that the visual tells the story. If you need quick title cards like that to try to put it into context, then you haven't planned a 30 second visual story. (It's also really hard to read those quick text overlays while you're trying to watch.) Perhaps that's why some people commented on this being recycled? Because having a different take, in and of itself, is cool and does not nece

I agree with a few of the other posts...I think this was prolly created for something else then recycled for this..just saying. Nice renders tho

beautiful

Hope you have the rights to all those images. You can't just paste other people's work and claim it as your own.

great vid! what's up with the votes or ranks? 1 stars on the tops?

Music is so sentimental...Very emotional aniamtion. I will stay tuned, as you say :)