1 is bad needs improvment doesnt go fast too slow makes me wanna make it speed up at the end it goes back to the starting of it then finishes not the best near the bottum lke it but dont like it wierd huh

same thing too slow and jumpy. needs to be faster. needs alot of work, and idea of it all is just...terrible. sorry dude.

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nimeskern, i just got this so cut me some slack

cool!

too slow and jumpy. needs to be faster. needs alot of work, and idea of it all is just...terrible. sorry dude.

nice nice :) ;) but i cant every where not too copy my things...

g00d work man! this could help me a lot i seing as i have just started off. please give me tips by commenting on my work ! ty

whut d u mean rubbish?this is totally cool!!

it is ok